She looks nice but There are a few good and bad things standing out. A punch before a hug?
First of all, her hands, Her left hand looks very awkward. It looks like shes making a wired gesture with her hand rather than laying it on her hip.
Her right hand completely misses the sword. her fingers aren't wrapping around the sword as much as they are forming a fist independently.
her belt is kinda confusing since it's hard to make out if it's metal or fiber.the sword looks kinda disconnected behind the hair. the final bad note is that the lighting on her shield doesn't really make any sense.
On the upside the pose looks really nice and the expression is very readable and clear( and pretty awesome too). A lot of the armor is very clearly recognizable as metal and has a nice lighting on it. ( I like the backlight).
Thanks for reading this essay long review, Hope it helps. PS I would suggest using a midtone/grey background to draw on in order to bring out the highlights, shadows, and overall contrast. It is also much easier on the eyes in comparison to white.